William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Captivating Moments - Hiku

*Image of The Leaf is Falling Real Estate is Not by Shorewest Realtors.

captivating moments

free falling leaf
liberal spun air floats~~
grounded for life

2022 January 13

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Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2022 at 6:13 PM A fantastic ending to this beautiful hiku William. Congratulations on your top win! Blessings and Aloha, Connie xxoo William Kelii Kekaula January 14, 2022 at 7:09 PM My dear Connie, I am grateful for your wondrous courtesies and kind laudations. Stay safe my friend, ke Akua pu!

Kim Merryman January 14, 2022 at 2:22 PM A wonderful hiku, William! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M William Kelii Kekaula January 14, 2022 at 7:00 PM Thank you, Kim, for your thoughtful expressions. Stay safe my friend, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2022 at 10:50 AM Hello Rico, when the leaves fall they stay grounded. Until we rake them. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 14, 2022 at 11:44 AM Hello William, sorry i got the name wrong. I do enjoy your Hailu. Sometimes i do get the name wrong. Aloha! Darlene William Kelii Kekaula January 13, 2022 at 4:52 PM Hi, Darlene, it's William here appreciating your analyses of my hiku/haiku. I once mistook Jenna for Janice, but I do not know the whereabouts in Hawaii Rico resides at. Stay safe my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet January 13, 2022 at 8:59 AM Nicely written, Hiku, William. You captured a beautiful and sensitive scene—kindest regards, dear friend. William Kelii Kekaula January 13, 2022 at 10:00 AM Lasaad, you have my gratitude for your assessments, keep safe, Aloha!