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Captivated!

My words are so deep that when i speak i create a void in your mind. It's like a poetic poison running through the veins of your membrane; Paralyzing your state to maintain... You can't think of a thought to conclude...time has refrained. 'Though attempts you've tried to resist, still left you commentless. Like a sudden collapse of social structure that can't be revisited. You try to rebuild your thoughts, 'though my words won't let you in. My words are so creative, your chances are way too thin. No wonder there's no response...your mind can't take it in. For I've left you speechless...captivated by-submission.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/9/2010 5:54:00 PM
I had to comment to this, :) Though my brain is kinda baffled, well written poem!!
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