Captivated!

My words are so deep that when i speak i create 
a void in your mind. 
It's like a poetic poison running through the veins of 
your membrane; 
Paralyzing your state to maintain... 
You can't think of a thought to conclude...time has 
refrained. 
'Though attempts you've tried to resist, still left you 
commentless. 
Like a sudden collapse of social structure that can't 
be revisited. 
You try to rebuild your thoughts, 'though my words won't 
let you in. 
My words are so creative, your chances are way 
too thin. 
No wonder there's no response...your mind can't 
take it in. 
For I've left you speechless...captivated by-submission.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 9, 2010 at 5:54 PM
I had to comment to this, :) Though my brain is kinda baffled, well written poem!!
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