Captain White

Oh father of mine
Tall, true, giving Army gifts
Vietnam took you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 29, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Sad about your dad. He treasured his family so much to bring you war gift. My uncle some how would his hands on items he would collect in the war. Only to give them out as gift. I enjoyed ...
Moreno Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Poignant senryu delivered in the 5/7/5. You have captured the sadness profoundly, sorry for your loss...Raul
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March 22, 2010 at 1:10 PM
They're waiting, yes, they are. Thank you. I am sorry about your father, My God! Mine served in Korea. 8th Army under both Walker and then Ridgeway. He was at the Chosin Reservoir. I have never ever done this on this site but I will for you after reading this. I have a little poem called One Last Request From The Fallen Heroes. It might speak to you. I wrote it based on what I heard from my father and others. Regards, Gerard
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March 22, 2010 at 9:53 AM
This is sad. I'm sorry Mitch. (Soupmail)
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 8:44 AM
I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Mitch. Love, Carol
Hallett Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 7:49 AM
That is sad. Keep writing!!! -Courtney- Thank you for your comments!!!
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March 22, 2010 at 7:44 AM
How emotional and moving in so few words.
Burton Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 7:40 AM
You summed up all your emotions and sarrow in three lines. Americans, especially ones close to your heart who lost their life fighting for this country. Enjoy your day.:)
A  Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:48 PM
A very good read. Lately I have been reading alot about the Vietnam war..Took alot of americans. Enjoyed the read...
Murphy Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 11:34 AM
VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA
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March 21, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Thought provoking poem. I powerful reminder of the cost of war. Blessings to all that sacrifice so much that we may enjoy freedom. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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