Canyon Arms

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               canyon arms embrace
                           protecting ravine secrets
                                         from the Venus star

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Anna-Marie Docherty

April 22, 2010 at 12:34 AM

Anm unusual take on this one that I really like because it's something I'd never have cnsidered! A wonderful picture painted and worthy winner! Thanks for your welcome comments on my poetry, (I have health issues,) so sorry it took so long to come back to you... Good to be back and looking forward to reading and writing again! kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.

Marty Owens

April 18, 2010 at 11:31 AM

Congratulations on your win...Wonderful Haiku...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

April 18, 2010 at 10:01 AM

Congratulations on your win with a lovely write. Caryl

Faleshia Murphy

April 18, 2010 at 9:32 AM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Kim M

April 18, 2010 at 8:32 AM

I adore this perspective of the photo! The image of arms embracing and sheltering is so vividly clear, and yet I did not see it when I viewed the photo. Marvelously conveyed.

Carrie Richards

April 18, 2010 at 8:27 AM

HOORAY FOR YOU, ABE!!! Well deserved my friend, and beautiful images you have portrayed in this lovely poem! 1st place!!! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 18, 2010 at 7:47 AM

Congrats Abe on your 1st place win in Gareth's contest... amazing write..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

April 18, 2010 at 5:35 AM

Well deserved first place win, Abe! Congrats mucho. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

April 18, 2010 at 4:27 AM

simply lovely! and good form! Light & Love

Gareth James

April 18, 2010 at 2:33 AM

Congrats on 1st place win in my contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 18, 2010 at 12:54 AM

A fine meaningful haiku

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2010 at 8:00 AM

Another winning poem from Abe!! It is so nice to see your name back on the Soup!! Hope you are doing well, and Kaleb too! (Will has a birthday in a couple of weeks...10 years old...wow!! How fast they grow!:)