Canyon Arms

. * canyon arms embrace protecting ravine secrets from the Venus star

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Rick Parise

Date: 5/3/2010 1:02:00 PM

Very nice ~Congrats~Rick

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/22/2010 12:34:00 AM

Anm unusual take on this one that I really like because it's something I'd never have cnsidered! A wonderful picture painted and worthy winner! Thanks for your welcome comments on my poetry, (I have health issues,) so sorry it took so long to come back to you... Good to be back and looking forward to reading and writing again! kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.

Marty Owens

Date: 4/18/2010 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Wonderful Haiku...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/18/2010 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with a lovely write. Caryl

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/18/2010 9:32:00 AM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Kim M

Date: 4/18/2010 8:32:00 AM

I adore this perspective of the photo! The image of arms embracing and sheltering is so vividly clear, and yet I did not see it when I viewed the photo. Marvelously conveyed.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/18/2010 8:27:00 AM

HOORAY FOR YOU, ABE!!! Well deserved my friend, and beautiful images you have portrayed in this lovely poem! 1st place!!! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2010 7:47:00 AM

Congrats Abe on your 1st place win in Gareth's contest... amazing write..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/18/2010 5:35:00 AM

Well deserved first place win, Abe! Congrats mucho. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/18/2010 4:27:00 AM

simply lovely! and good form! Light & Love

Gareth James

Date: 4/18/2010 2:33:00 AM

Congrats on 1st place win in my contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/18/2010 12:54:00 AM

A fine meaningful haiku

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2010 8:00:00 AM

Another winning poem from Abe!! It is so nice to see your name back on the Soup!! Hope you are doing well, and Kaleb too! (Will has a birthday in a couple of weeks...10 years old...wow!! How fast they grow!:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2010 6:44:00 AM

I thought I saw Venus in that photo, too, Abe. VERY well done! Best wishes for the contest. Great to see you posting again, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/17/2010 12:38:00 AM

Ow this is a beauty,Lovely haiku-Charma

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/16/2010 11:57:00 PM

Nice work here Abe, great opening line...Raul