Canyon

Canyon widens
River nearly dry
Are you in love with her?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Monteverdi Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Wow, I love this. Concise yet powerful and weighted
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:45 PM
excellent one! Congrats on your win.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Thanks Luke, I am glad you participated.
Irwin Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Thank you all very much.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 4:30 AM
Congrats on your winning spot Luke and good question...xx
A   Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Luke.. wow...love this...good luck in the contest..pd
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 3:30 PM
this is really nice how you kept it very like a real haiku even adding on the question. One of the best ones.
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Nice one, Luke. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)
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