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Canyon

It curves and it twist, Winding down so peacefully, Chewing at the stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/10/2009 12:54:00 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:17:00 AM
Very nice haiku. Love the last line ~Juliane
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:57:00 AM
Another well done imaginative Haiku, Walker.Enjoyed. _Robert
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:39:00 AM
Great imagery. I can picture it so clearly. Really love that last line. Very creative. Smiles from Lolita
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