Canyon

roaming the mountains
and the desert floor
sun high over head
i've been here before

seeking the answers
to the quandaries that plague me
no solutions forth coming
my resolve diminishing

and i shout in the canyon
the question "WHY"
and the echo that returns
is "the promises were lies"

the things that you did
and the things that you said
keep ricocheting around
inside of my head

my steps are unsteady
did i stray from the path
thirsting for answers
before i can go back

and i shout in the canyon
the question "WHY"
and the echo that returns
is "the promises were lies"

the weariness is coming
i stumble and fall
nothing to grab hold of
there's no help at all

my direction now falters
which way should i go
praying for guidance
praying to know

and i shout in the canyon
the question "WHY"
and the echo that returns
is "the promises were lies"

heaven betrayed me
hell opens it's door
redemption can't find me
on this desert floor

i've burned all my bridges
and hell's flames scorch at me
there's just no way back
none that i'll ever see

and i shout in the canyon
the question "WHY"
and the echo that returns
is "the promises were lies"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 1, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week J B. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 5:24 PM
J.B. excellent imagery in this poem - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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May 31, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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May 30, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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