Canvas of Pond

canvas of pond etched in gray...

tulip frames a halo



Rick Parise's One Broken Monoku
by nette onclaud
12/1/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara
Devnath  Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:58 AM
NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Beautiful win, Nette. Congrats to you.
Kayode Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Congrats on the win nette...huggs
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Very nice Broken Monoku, Nette. I love the image. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 6:54 PM
This is such a beautiful image nette, I just have to fav it!
Yvonne Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 6:53 PM
Congratulations on your first place win!
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 4:27 PM
What a beautiful image you paint here, Nette! Congrats on your top win. // paul
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 3:35 PM
congratulations on this win Nette
Peterson Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Supernal! Inconceivable how you gain such depth with sparse language. I'm really speechless (and quite envious as well).
Sirak Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Stunning!
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 11:56 AM
so peaceful an image Nette gl in contest hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 3:21 PM
this is beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 1:01 PM
- Great write, Nette - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 9:27 AM
good luck nette, like this
Trifiatis Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Brilliantly depicted, dear nette! Good luck!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:42 AM
I can see the painting before me and a smile crossed my face. Lovely Nette
May Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Very nice write Nette...good luck in the contest
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:35 AM
hey great canvas. great play. great monoku. Good luck in contest nette.LoveXXX rajat
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Such imagery in so few words - good luck Nette:-) Its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
Sabre Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 3:03 AM
The change of the scene provides impact to your monoku. Another imaginative poem scribed well, Nette
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