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Canvas of Pond

canvas of pond etched in gray...

tulip frames a halo



Rick Parise's One Broken Monoku
by nette onclaud
12/1/2014

butterflywatermonoku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2014 4:38:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/29/2014 11:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 8:58:00 AM

NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2014 9:12:00 PM

Beautiful win, Nette. Congrats to you.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/27/2014 9:10:00 PM

Congrats on the win nette...huggs

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2014 7:04:00 PM

Very nice Broken Monoku, Nette. I love the image. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 6:54:00 PM

This is such a beautiful image nette, I just have to fav it!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 6:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 5:44:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2014 4:27:00 PM

What a beautiful image you paint here, Nette! Congrats on your top win. // paul

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 3:35:00 PM

congratulations on this win Nette

Mark Peterson

Date: 12/5/2014 10:54:00 AM

Supernal! Inconceivable how you gain such depth with sparse language. I'm really speechless (and quite envious as well).

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/4/2014 8:27:00 AM

Stunning!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/3/2014 11:56:00 AM

so peaceful an image Nette gl in contest hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2014 3:21:00 PM

this is beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2014 1:01:00 PM

- Great write, Nette - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/2/2014 9:27:00 AM

good luck nette, like this

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/2/2014 8:03:00 AM

Brilliantly depicted, dear nette! Good luck!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/2/2014 7:42:00 AM

I can see the painting before me and a smile crossed my face. Lovely Nette

Joseph May

Date: 12/2/2014 7:38:00 AM

Very nice write Nette...good luck in the contest

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/2/2014 7:35:00 AM

hey great canvas. great play. great monoku. Good luck in contest nette.LoveXXX rajat

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 6:53:00 AM

Such imagery in so few words - good luck Nette:-) Its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx

Gabby Sabre

Date: 12/2/2014 3:03:00 AM

The change of the scene provides impact to your monoku. Another imaginative poem scribed well, Nette

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