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Canvas of Life

cast your spell upon the canvas, and life begins anew, the lines do lose their blandness, and life comes into view... bandwith. Don Johnson

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/23/2012 1:36:00 PM

Well iv'e enjoyed this one Don, "don't know 'bout bandwith though..?" question is do i..? ( need to i mean..? ) prhaps i'm just being nosey..) this could be a trap..! oh..! no..! i'm down the flap...! its dark in here..! now what am i going to do..? i know i'll have to think up a poem or two..!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/9/2012 12:05:00 PM

I like this rhyme of yours, Don. It's kind of catchy. Thanks for your comments on my poems. I dearly appreciate the time you take read my work . Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/8/2012 10:41:00 PM

Very well written write Don! Masterfully written, with a perfect rhyming scheme! My favorite line has to be, "...and life comes into view..." very powerful line! It says so much! Great poem Don, awesome work!!