Canvas of Life

The panels faded o'er time earlier creativity constrains
Yet the material value of past visions maintains
Canvas now tinted with darker hues; youthful vigor restrains
But each, underlying tone, burnished with yesterday's dreams, remains
Once gilded strokes now meaningless, paternalistic strains
Yet the meandering pattern an innocent quality still contains
Each, delicate, insecure swab the grainy picture retains
But on the brash backstrokes the forgiving eye trains
Every callous blot each year more opprobrium drains
But every thoughtful deviation the quilted fabric ingrains   
Glossy pictures of green pastures corroded by earthy stains
But ephemeral beauty from burgeoning fount surrealistic vista still feigns
The counterfeit copy the brokered ideal even more disdains
But the bartered images serve to rationalize nominal gains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 Line" contest Stephen. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Awesome write! Congratulations on a well deserved win! Lori
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Stephen.
Guzzi Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Interesting monorhyme! Congrad's Light & Love
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