Can'T Take This Suffering

**I've taken my meds, why can't I sleep?
My body is tired and my thoughts running deep.
If I laid down, I know I'd start aching,
Wanting to rest, this pain is breath taking.

**At times I literally want to break free,
And be rid of this condition swallowing me.
For it has caused me to be over stressed,
I just can't help I feel so depressed.

**Plus it's caused a whole lot of grief,
All I ask is to have some relief.
And these pains I've noticed are shooting everywhere,
Why can't I pretend they're not even there?

**Especially when my legs are the very first to swell,
It makes it even tougher to walk very well.
So when will a cure be under way?
Because I can't take this suffering everyday. 
©May 2022 Melissa Darsey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 5/5/2022 3:48:00 PM
Hello Melissa, I wish thwere was a specalit that could help you with you pain. I wish the specialist could find a cure for you. You are in my prayers. Your poetess friend. Darlene
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Date: 6/4/2022 4:14:00 PM
Hello Melissa, welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 5/6/2022 10:26:00 AM
Hello Melissa I wish there was a specialist that could help you with your pain. I wish the specialist could find a cure for your pain. You are in my prayers. Your poetess friend Darlene.
Date: 5/5/2022 11:42:00 AM
Hippocrates said there is no illness which cannot be cured by food. Have you tried ice cream in the middle of the night? Aloha!
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Date: 5/5/2022 7:02:00 AM
Oh Melissa you sound so distressed and fed up. Whatever you are experiencing sounds terrible. I hope you are ok? You expressed yourself so well in this poem…I really do hope you are able to get some relief from your pain and sadness. Take care of yourself. Debx
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