Cant Let Her Win.

Theres this empty feeling, 
a lost part, a half written story that's just about to start,
but for some reason it feels like its crashing, 
into a stand still like nothings going to happen, 
she warned me it might end this way, but still i sit and hope and pray
that boy ill be yours some day, cause i cant let her win this way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 27, 2010 at 12:15 AM
Smile ~ Never say never and, never give up the fight for ones true love for, what mountains seem to be in the way are but, a discarded horizon beyond the distance of such dreams which one seeks ~ What is life without love; and what is love but, the breath of life ~ "Wonderful Poem of Hope" ~ "Love Always," John!:) ~
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