Can'T Go Onthis Way

6-20-2012	I can't go on this way
				Just the edge of the beginning,I began to see,
				What was being said,was not what we had,
				Like a blue nose on a red faced clown,it's not the same,
				No matter how hard you try to explain,
				Kinda hard to be free when inside a cage,to keep in mind,
				I hardly knew you, your actions ruled over me,
				Until I broke away,now I live in the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 7:58 AM
run or should I say fly to the moon Ricky,get away,that relationship sounds like a one way ticket,lol,great write
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 2:34 PM
Very strong person that was bound..Reminds me of Jackie Gleason's saying to Alice about he was going to send her to the moon..Sara
Henderson Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Yippie ....if thas how you spell it anyway...cause brotha...you on yo way. Peace and blessing my friend..
Brown Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Man.
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