Can'T Get Over You

your under my skin
all i do is grim
no one can win
my love deep in
am so blue
there 's nuthin i can do
i
CAN'T GET OVER YOU
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 23, 2011 at 7:15 PM
This is your best poem for a number of reasons. For one, most of your words were spelled correctly, excepting "Nothing." Also, this was a good meaning, written pretty expressively, and finally, you didn't put the title in all capital letters!
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