Can'T Fool Life

Wake up and smell the coffee
Forget that stupid things you dreamed about
Believe me, you ain't worthy
It turned your life completely upside down

Your fate is almost challenge 
And there is nobody who has your back
You thought that life is balance 
But all what you got is a heart attack

Chorus
Hey fool
You ain't cool


Desiring for needed power
There is Byronic hero inside of you
Your life is going sour
There's no plan, it's always out of the blue

I could say a lot of words if I wanted to
But you decided to cross swords and I'm willing to 
stop you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Alisa I like your poem.The fool is not cool. have a nice day my friend. Have a nice dy my friend.You will gain knowledge. Have a nice day my friend.
Michael Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 2:29 PM
"Hey fool You ain't cool" Say it like it is, Alisa. Enjoyed your poem...A good afternoon to you
Swartz Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Great Great Great stuff! The byronic hero (always been a favorite phrase of mine) part is genius Alisa. It flows and says so much i can and will re-read it many times.
Balaieva Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:43 AM
Hi James, Thank you for nice words. I appreciate it. It's always important for me to hear critics, because I want to write better and better. I'm not native English-speaker, so writing poetry is my way of gaining knowledge.
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