Get Your Premium Membership

Can'T Fix It When You Look Back

Does this window have a view we can watch together? you and I front seats, we can watch forever. watch forever pass by or does it stand still? you said you didn't care while I held your hand.. silly girl you make time seem timeless i'm just a pause on the clock my minute hand on the 9 sits still... i wish there was a will, to make a beautiful way i knew you couldn't stay we left in pain today. i need a minute of your time to make this last, we tried you could never be more fine and you could never be mine because forever is the enemy of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/18/2012 4:39:00 PM
Thank you both!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/16/2012 3:10:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/15/2012 9:12:00 PM
Patrick, i agree with time being my enemy,,, still i wish every day to pass quickly.. enjoyed, your poem..pd
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs