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Can'T Fight This Feeling.......

A tear trickled down the side of her freckled skin, Her heart was shouting, deep within, The beads of sweat lay on her forehead, As she thought of what her peers said, The adrenalin rushed round her body-like water in a tap, Her hands shook with worry as she typed this rap, The blood pumped around her brain so very fast, She takes a deep breath-how much loner will this last? The thoughts run around her brain like a dog chasing a cat, She is a human being but treated like a rat, So one last time she calms herself down, And makes a smile out of a frown, God help me she says and looks up above, Then she is showered with love, God is by my side lighting lamps to guide me, He is the only one that makes me feel free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/29/2025 12:44:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:07:00 PM
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