Can'T Catch My Breath

The sky has tuned an ominous gray,
the tops of trees begin to sway,
imitation white caps form
and mock the ocean ere the storm.

I watch the thistle feeder swing,
the finches golden cannot cling,
and now I hear the stormy wind,
feel goose bumps rise upon my skin.

The lake rushes like a river,
the birds en masse begin to quiver,
squirrels drape their tails upon their backs
await the rain and thunder's crack.

The world outside seems bled of hues,
stripped of all its reds and blues,
greens and browns seemed washed in gray,
and summer seems so far away.

The sky broadcasts a visual threat,
I watch and light a cigarette.
Soon great drops of rain pour down,
deafening, muffling every sound.

I burrow deeper in my bed
and try to shake the sense of dread.
Nature has the upper hand
on this piece of lake front land.

How'd I wind up in this place?
I miss the southern charm and grace,
I long for Spanish moss draped trees.
and hunger for the ocean's breeze.

Ah, well, I'm here, and here I'll stay,
and live to work another day,
The lake, once loved, resounds of death,
in sorrow, I can't catch my breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 1/11/2009 2:11:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this poem. I love nature poems and you did an excellent job on this one. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:38:00 PM
Wonderful, wonderful, rhyme meter, imagery! My blog was to shake up folks brain with the sheer unadulterated stream of consciuosness JOY which poetry can bring & I not as good a poet as The Beatles were! Also, even I have seldom seen the words without the music ..marvelous yes!! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/11/2009 12:07:00 PM
good job that was really really good...........danielle
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Date: 1/10/2009 12:56:00 PM
I really loved this one, Danielle. The longing for another place, the sounds of dread outside your place. Well done! ~Carrie
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Date: 1/10/2009 9:26:00 AM
Breathtaking!! very passionately expressed and lots of descriptive notes throughout the flow, I really loved this one,It's Terrific!!!Tyesha
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Date: 1/10/2009 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful!!!!!!!! very nature's poem reminds me of the Romantic period of poetry , in fact it's my curriculum this year. nice work Danielle.
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