Can'T Cant Comment
Read you after eons with dull interest,
failed in making sense of the rhyme,
saddened to hear up is my time,
cursed your free verse bodied in five lines,
why o why! My attention is deprived?
Murdered and forgotten,
so long, and gone emotion,
why was there ever life?
I have now opened eyes,
don't belittle me,
so what? have I corrupted mind,
loosen your grip,
neglect your affect,
fade your memories,
cut me off,
roll my eyes,
exit this page,
excuse my excuse,
read you but unread you,
sorry poem I can't cant comment on you.
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