Cant Bring Me Down

Life is hard but can’t stop me
Life is a game but I can’t be beat
I keep climbing higher and higher and higher
I may stumble down but  I don’t get tired
faith in myself and nothing is better
It is just me there is no “together”
Like a Nike commercial I just have to do it
Learn from me and there is nothing to it.
Wait your turn because I come first
Better watch out I’m about to burst
I sting like a bee, your gonna get hurt
I don’t have feelings, you are just dirt
Not trying to be mean, just stating how it is
I have a cold heart and the problem is his
I’m on top of the world, can’t be knocked down
I’m held underwater, but i cannot drown
People call me names I just don’t care
Try to hurt me and that is a dare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/1/2010 5:14:00 PM
GOOD AND INTERESTING WRITE... THANKS FOR SHARING
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:56:00 PM
i like your style. and the way you put words together. brave bold creative. great work! John H Loving III
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Date: 2/8/2010 12:24:00 PM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Kelsey. Keep writing it will help. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2010 9:28:00 PM
selfishness is not a happy trait. But i liked it, it pumps you up, sometimes you need a bit of pride to get off the ground.
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