Cant Be (2) Remix

His Eyes Opened Wide
His Suprise Was Unable To Hide
"Are You Sure" He Asked
She Nodded, Her Emotions Still Masked
His Eyes Lit Up, Still Nervous Though
She Filled Them Like Wine Filling A Cup, Lifted To Bros
He Fell Down To One Knee 
Infront Of Her Like A Dream
And Pulled Out His Class Ring
"I Wasnt Really Planning On Doing This Boo. But Will You Marry Me?"
Her Mouth Opened, Fell Into An O
He Didnt Know If That Was A No 
"I- I Dont Know Babe"
The Words Poured Out Of Her Mouth In A Darker Shade
He Brought His Quivering Lips To Hers With A Kiss
Confused She Pulled Away From His Lips
"No", Her Voice Broke 
"No", She Repeated Trying Not To Choke
"Its Not Right. I Dont Want This Just Because They Say Its Right"
She Whispered Into The Night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 2:01 AM
WOW!Why'd she SAY NO=c UNFAIR!wait is he single?Let him Call me up=p Love It BOOO=D
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