Canine Revenge

Some dog taught me this,
your head sinks and your butt floats.
It’s called cat paddling!


For “Primal Instinct” contest.    And the dog says’ “Oops, My Bad!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 28, 2015 at 6:18 PM
Haha, Love the haiku. SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Love the humor in this one...I needed the laugh today...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowiing...Thanks for the comments on my work.."The Demise Of Hotel Upson"...The First Baptist Church bought it after it had been for sale for several years..They are going to build a new santuary so I am told..Sara
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May 3, 2010 at 3:20 AM
Lol, heehee way to funny, John! I sure wouldn't want to be there when that tiger came out of the water! wish you the best in the contest!
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:01 PM
so didnt' it get anything? Heck, this was a good funny!! Glad you liked my sonnet. LUv, andrea
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April 30, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for the day brightener. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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April 30, 2010 at 4:16 AM
Quite witty, John. Love the note you added at the end. Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn
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April 30, 2010 at 3:08 AM
thanks for the light relief.. love the humour...Margaret
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