Canine Revenge

Some dog taught me this,
your head sinks and your butt floats.
It’s called cat paddling!


For “Primal Instinct” contest.    And the dog says’ “Oops, My Bad!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/28/2015 6:18:00 PM
Haha, Love the haiku. SKAT
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:48:00 AM
Love the humor in this one...I needed the laugh today...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowiing...Thanks for the comments on my work.."The Demise Of Hotel Upson"...The First Baptist Church bought it after it had been for sale for several years..They are going to build a new santuary so I am told..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:20:00 AM
Lol, heehee way to funny, John! I sure wouldn't want to be there when that tiger came out of the water! wish you the best in the contest!
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:01:00 PM
so didnt' it get anything? Heck, this was a good funny!! Glad you liked my sonnet. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:23:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for the day brightener. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:16:00 AM
Quite witty, John. Love the note you added at the end. Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2010 3:08:00 AM
thanks for the light relief.. love the humour...Margaret
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