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Candy of the Sea

Candy of The Sea When the Sea recedes Golden sand precedes A funny tableau is seen After the ebbing green: Nude, we find the task On the sand to bask. Caked on yellow sand(y) We then look like candy! 21st August 2013

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Date: 12/5/2013 8:15:00 AM
Joseph This is a unique and interesting rhyme. Very sensual and sexy. You made me blush towards the end. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Wasted Life poem
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Robin, I appreciate. JM

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