Joseph Matose Poet Rhyme

Candy of the Sea

Candy of The Sea

When the Sea recedes
Golden sand precedes
A funny tableau is seen
After the ebbing green:
Nude, we find the task
On the sand to bask.
Caked on yellow sand(y)
We then look like candy!


21st August 2013

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Robin Davis December 5, 2013 at 8:15 AM Joseph This is a unique and interesting rhyme. Very sensual and sexy. You made me blush towards the end. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Wasted Life poem Joseph Matose December 5, 2013 at 8:40 AM Thanks Robin, I appreciate. JM