Rhia Madison Thomer Poet Rhyme

Candy Medicine

I abuse the power of these pills
the ones the doctor gave,
the numbness it brings
making me their robotic slave,
I feel it overtake my system
cold snow, blank static fuzz, numb
that's it yes, here I am?
I'm the someone who is no one.
Tell me, tell me, pray tell me,
don't you hate to feel
I hate the way it is,
no it doesn't seem real.
So I take the pills the doctor gave
because I can't stand the pain
I don't like the sunshine
when I'm cold as rain
so tonight I'll take them
1,2,10, just right
then I'll be frozen forever
I don't want to feel tonight.

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John Rhinem June 10, 2009 at 10:44 PM Oh, so that's why "You" didn't email me back? "You" took ten pills and went catatonic! Smile, well, we are going to have to do something about all of that~Because "You" are too great of a writer, to ever be swallowed up by any pills!!~"Hello Precious, Gifted & Beautiful Madison Thomer!!!":):)~I am looking so forward, to watching "Your Amazing Writing" continue to grow~"You" are going to be astounding I believe!!!:):)~"My Love & Warmth Always To You & Your Loves, Forever, John!!:):) Smile ~