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Candles

Candles
flicker gently
until moonlight appears,
then move into rapid laughter
higher

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Paul Callus

January 20, 2021 at 12:33 PM

You have a cute and witty imagination, Angela. Next time I'll try to light up the moon with a candle :) Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree

January 22, 2021 at 8:04 AM

Thank you, Paul :)

Michael Jordan

July 6, 2008 at 3:48 PM

this poem offers the reader a clear visual - wonderful job - congrats on the feature

Crystal Seals

June 15, 2008 at 2:30 PM

Hello~Astrid congrats! on your featured poem.Candles are definitely a mood setter.Laugh on...B BLESS Crystal

Deneen White

June 13, 2008 at 4:33 PM

Astrid, congrats, this is witty, light-hearted and fun, take care D-nyce

Sara Lokken

June 10, 2008 at 5:12 PM

My dear friend, congragulations on being featured with this lovely piece. Love, Sara:)

Laura Mckenzie

June 10, 2008 at 2:54 PM

Astrid How lovely congratulations on your featured poem this week! Laura

Sue Mason

June 10, 2008 at 2:47 PM

Wonderful use of this form, Astrid. The end line totally took me by surprise!! This is surely a well-deserved selection as a favorite of the week here at the Soup! Congratulations!