Candlemas

dampness and dolour
cold dark days disappear-
begone,winter fear


Candlemas is today 2nd Feb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 5:45 PM
dolor is the right word for the grey days of winter. I have to fight the sadness.
Richards Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 8:30 AM
The color of our day here as well....a cold dark day in No. California. Enjoyed this. ~ Carrie
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February 2, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Interesting Haiku and your title is unique as today in the Catholic faith Feb. 2nd is observed as Candlemas Day... a day when all Christians of all faiths come together with candles to praise God... wonderful Brian.. book is awesome too.. luv.. Linda-Marie .. many thankxxx for your congrats on my first .. first place win..
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