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poem submitted to "Light a Pensee" poetry contest, Nette Onclaud, sponsor, July 25, 2026

CANDLELIGHT

lean flame
the ancient stones
my breath circles quiet room
slow orbit returns to center
emptiness becomes peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 9:46 PM
lovely poetry !! <3
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 10:18 AM
What a wonderful write/pretty picture. "Good Luck" I did, "LIGHT FROM CANDLES." Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............
Scragg Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Lovely :-D like the positive feeling towards solitude in this. That it brings peace. This poem is relaxing. Nicely penned Sara :-D x
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Nicely done
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