Candle Relations

Candle Relations
When he asked me, it was lit
A red blazing flame

Candle Relations
The wick our love, long and strong
Wax; problems melting

Candle Relations
We held up against the wind
Our flame's only grown

Candle Relations
Ours will burn forevermore
Candle Relations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 9, 2009 at 4:05 PM
I like the way you use the candle to describe the stages in your relationship. Nice write! Love, Carolyn
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