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Candle Lit Room

a candle lit room scent of roses permeates~ draperies in flames October 7, 2022 Simply Senryu Contest Sponsored by John Lawless

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Date: 10/15/2022 9:38:00 AM
Very cool , in a fiery way! Congrats
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Date: 10/14/2022 6:45:00 AM
...or a metaphor for a scorching hot rendezvous .....thanks for entering the contest Jenna
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2022 6:55:00 AM
lol I wasn't sure this would make it to your winning list, but it what came from my candle lit moment. Thanks for the placement, John.
Date: 10/7/2022 1:03:00 PM
Not everything is as it seems...fire consumes, fire glows, fire warms, fire can kill. Evocative Senryu, JL. :o/
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2022 6:54:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts, Arlo.
Date: 10/7/2022 9:00:00 AM
Oh dear. You must always keep an eye on a burning candle! Good one, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2022 11:43:00 AM
This one just kinda combusted out of nowhere... I mean the Senryu. lol Thanks, Milt.

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