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Candle Lit Room

a candle lit room
scent of roses permeates~
                  draperies in flames 




October 7, 2022
Simply Senryu Contest
Sponsored by John Lawless

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2022

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Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2022 at 9:38 AM

Very cool , in a fiery way! Congrats

October 14, 2022 at 6:45 AM

...or a metaphor for a scorching hot rendezvous .....thanks for entering the contest Jenna

October 14, 2022 at 6:55 AM

lol I wasn't sure this would make it to your winning list, but it what came from my candle lit moment. Thanks for the placement, John.

October 7, 2022 at 1:03 PM

Not everything is as it seems...fire consumes, fire glows, fire warms, fire can kill. Evocative Senryu, JL. :o/

October 14, 2022 at 6:54 AM

Thank you for your thoughts, Arlo.

L Milton Hankins

October 7, 2022 at 9:00 AM

Oh dear. You must always keep an eye on a burning candle! Good one, Jenna.

October 7, 2022 at 11:43 AM

This one just kinda combusted out of nowhere... I mean the Senryu. lol Thanks, Milt.

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