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Candle Flame

The drop of fire stealthily burns A tender angel descended into darkness Spirit raised by my own hand It grasps into the viscous air Clinging, to rise, struggle, survive, Calmly watching I realise I created torment The flame needed me to live I needed it to feel safe Then I wonder who's need is greater The creature of the creator? -MXC

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/22/2009 1:04:00 AM
I like the picture you describe here Melanie X. I am checking out poetry by British authors. Should your last line be creature OR the creator?
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