Candle

CANDLE	
I will be for you.
All my life that is left, I will live for you,
and when time has run out,
I will die for you.
I will speak your name
in each candle that I light, I will breath your name.
I will whisper you,
every prayer I ever say will be part of you.

For eternity,
and forever it has been, and will always be,
and when I leave this world,
it will go with me.
In a candle light
all the world keeps on turning, making day and night,
and from dark to light,
you'll be part of every prayer that ever comes from me.

I will be for you.
Like a cool mountain spring that overflows for you
like a warm summer breeze 
through the trees for you.
In a candle glow,
everything I've ever been or will ever be
for eternity,
you'll be part of everything I ever do.
I will be for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/7/2011 9:00:00 AM
outstanding poem.a poets poem is this and I love it.
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Date: 12/6/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Veebdosa. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 6:16:00 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Vee. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 9:56:00 AM
very creative ,great work
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