Candle

The wick burns eternally
Slow lazy flame dancing
Moves like a snake charmer
Though its symbol is of pure power
Its fragile life is easy to snuff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 5, 2011 at 4:57 PM
Nick,, still now i see the amazing gift you have... enjoyed,, soup mail,,.p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 2:55 PM
good one showing the contrast of power and frailty in the candle, Nick! Luv, andrea
Jones Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 1:36 PM
i like it and think its pretty good.
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