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Candle

The wick burns eternally Slow lazy flame dancing Moves like a snake charmer Though its symbol is of pure power Its fragile life is easy to snuff

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2011 4:57:00 PM
Nick,, still now i see the amazing gift you have... enjoyed,, soup mail,,.p.d.
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Date: 1/5/2011 2:55:00 PM
good one showing the contrast of power and frailty in the candle, Nick! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/5/2011 1:36:00 PM
i like it and think its pretty good.
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