Candle

dancing amber flames
             a dance of flickering lights
  like stars in dark nights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Herrick Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 1:36 AM
Sometimes you can see them turn red to blue to white. The stars that dance. Fire is always showing off too. I like it!
Ruwindi Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Thanks, :)
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