Cancer

Carnivorous disease
Advances on its
Never erring 
Course of pain
Eating all before it with no
Respite for its host.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Young Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:34 AM
so sad but well put together so sorry you are in our prayers
Winter Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 5:04 PM
I don't think there is anyone who has not had a loved one, or does not know of someone suffering from this horrible disease. soup mail. xoxo
Kopp Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Wonderfully written. Thanks for your comment on mine. It was written for my Grandfather in his last days battling cancer. He passed in 2003. It has taken such a toll on our family and many mourned for so long. He was a HUGE Saints fan so he was especially on my mind when the Saints took the Super Bowl yesterday. Hugs and prayers to you and your family.
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January 26, 2010 at 3:49 AM
Thank you for sharing your story with us in the blog and also in your recent comment, Janette. You are a strong woman to stand by your husband and ensure he receives the best quality of care at this time. You and he are in my prayers along with John Heck (a shocker yesterday), Danielle White and several other wonderful Soup members who are struggling right now. If you ever want to talk, send me your number and I'll give you a call. It may help. God bless you. Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Having seen many fine people die from this insidious disease, I should say you hit the nail on the head here, Janette. Cancer is carnivorous, erosive and offers "no respite." God, I hate to think of people as "hosts," but to this disease too many have served as such. Outstanding writing, Janette. (My dear friend "Jeanett" died of cancer in 2003, followed by my friend Chris in 2005 who helped me give the euology at Jeanett's funeral days before learning he had cancer.) Excellent work!
Guzzi Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 1:47 PM
yike a TRUE verse (shiver) HUG HUG HUG! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 4:33 AM
A very serious topic that many encounter in their or a family members lifetime. Thats for reminding us that this is happening in our fine country and maybe that through research this illness can be conquered. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Delacroix Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 11:24 PM
It s a deadly monster alright. This acrostic expresses that quite well. Thanks for sharing. And thank you for your kind congrats on my featured poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.
Owens Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 2:22 PM
That's it alright....I lost a wife to this terrible thing called cancer...you have defined it well...Marty
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 1:35 PM
EXCELLENT acrostic for this horrible disease! LUv, andrea
Haick Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 1:32 PM
You have captured the meaning in this great Acrostic, Janette! Good write! Thank you for your kind comment today! Peace, Audrey
Peranteau Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Thank you for you kind comment today Janette ! And many more fine writes for you,...this Acrostic was very touching. james
Thekidster Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Cancer has taken many loved ones from me away. I'll kick it's butt if it happens to come my way (Hopefully). Great Write Janette. Best Wishes Always, Bill
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 10:45 AM
I hope the respite comes in the form of acceptance and God's grace. Coming from someone who has been dying from disease off and on for over 15 years. Much love and prayers to anyone facing disease themselves or of a loved one. Thanks for sharing. Love, Scarlet
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Sadly true... (well written acrostic)
Culverhouse Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 8:27 AM
you describe it well, so destructive to the body, physical and emotional scars
Gumbo Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 8:35 AM
if you insert a U, then a small switch, the meaning is CAN CURE... I insist to see it this way, in love for those I know and for those I don't know who struggle with this. Many hugs and and much love to you, for the new year. :) xo . we believe what we believe and the body does too. I believe we beat this one.
Radford Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Interesting acrostic Janette. A harrowing but cleverly written read. Many thanks for your comments on my work.
Brown Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 10:51 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Janette. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Spears Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Good coverage of a difficult subject.
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