Canary

treetop canary
singing under cobalt skies ~
unseen midst green leaves


Canary
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Written on 8/14/2021
For: Songbird haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Strand Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 12:34 AM
Neat observation Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thank you so much.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Back with congratulations on this win. A beautiful write with your "cobalt skies." Have a great/blessed day.....................
Buehler Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Thank you very much for the cheery remarks, Paula. Have a wonderful day as well, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Love the colorful description. STrange that not many did canary!! Congrats
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Thank you very much for your warm remarks and congratulations. :D
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 10:22 AM
I like the perspective Evelyn! You have us looking up into the bird's colorful realm. This is a beautiful glimpse into the world of this opera singer of the bird world! Congratulations on your win my friend! Sending you blessings "under cobalt" skies!
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 12:34 PM
I am so happy that you enjoyed this, Sam. Thank you for your heartwarming appreciation and congratulations. Have a wonderful day, my friend. :D
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Evelyn, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Thank you very much, Tania. I am so very honored. :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 1:06 AM
This is delicate and true; they are often hidden. Well done Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. :D
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 11:49 AM
A beautiful Haiku write. Love It. Have a great/blessed day.....................
Buehler Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:20 PM
Thank you for your kind appreciation. Blessings and hugs.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 11:34 PM
As the canary is free, it will sing better. Great haiku. Hugs.
Buehler Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:33 AM
I agree. Thank you for your very nice comment. Blessings and hugs.
Poet Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Great Haiku, Evelyn, wonderful imagery and stunning meaning. Best for a win.
Buehler Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 9:32 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Lasaad. Thank you.
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