Canada

forever it seems
our beloved maple leaf
yet winter's coming

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/9/2017 5:38:00 PM

Yes D.W. Rodgers winter is coming in fact I think it is already here. It is snowing to night.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/10/2017 11:30:00 AM

Thanks Darlene, yes snow here too overnight.

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/22/2017 1:33:00 PM

..A beautiful expression of Canadian pride :-) our maple leaf is such a great symbol of who we are :-) blessings, lynn

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/22/2017 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Lynn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2015 8:45:00 PM

Dave, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem has been an honor to read. Love LINDA

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/27/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2015 10:50:00 PM

I remember this one and how much I liked it. Congrats.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/26/2015 10:28:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 5:50:00 PM

simply stunning Dave - many congrats - a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/26/2015 10:27:00 AM

Thanks Jan your visits and kind words are always appreciated.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/24/2015 12:07:00 PM

Very well done haiku , Dave and big congrats to your poem !!! :O))

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/26/2015 10:22:00 AM

Thanks Aiyah

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/23/2015 10:33:00 PM

Great work Dave! Much said in this little haiku, congrats on top place win!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/24/2015 7:04:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Sharma

Skat A

Date: 7/23/2015 8:02:00 PM

THIS WAS MY FAV, OUT OF ALL MY #1 POEMS. DAVE, Congratulations, :) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS, It's an honor to have your haiku in my contest. Forever **SKAT**

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/23/2015 9:07:00 PM

Thanks SKAT, the last line just sort of appeared on its own and perhaps embodies the hesitancy of a small nation (in population) next to its big brother.

Skat A

Date: 7/23/2015 8:02:00 PM

YET WINTER IS COMING--DOES SO MUCH FOR THE HAIKU :) :) :)

Julia Ward

Date: 7/22/2015 1:28:00 AM

There are three things I like about your poem - it's traditional form, the emotion at "beloved", and the successful third line in moving the poem along, which, as Kim says, leaves something to ponder upon. I am giving it a 7, and marking it a FAVE.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/22/2015 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Julia

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/21/2015 8:42:00 AM

This haiku moment, I can well imagine. Yet it manages to leave something to ponder upon. Something is brewin' Dave? :-) I agree with SKAT, or, one can prepare for the coming metaphorical winter:-)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/21/2015 8:12:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2015 3:00:00 PM

Dave, wow... wow... time to embrace that moment before the breeze hits... SKAT LOVE (one of the best haiku I read today)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/21/2015 8:25:00 AM

Thanks SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2015 4:18:00 PM

Ahhh, and here is winter again. I see a theme!!! Nice one!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/19/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thanks, I'm just following the leader

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