Can You See Where I Really Want To Be

My mom and dad are divorced and I live with my dad. I only see my mom when she has 
time for me my mom I would rather not see. Her friends are more important than me. It 
makes me very sad that my mom never has any time for me. I hope someday she will 
see just how much it really hurts me. When I do see my mom her friends spend more 
time with me then she does. It is not there place to do that I’m not there kid. I don’t like 
her friends that much either. I always tell my mom she will be sorry latter for not 
spending time with me. I know she does not care sometimes I know it’s not fare. But I 
still would rather not go there. Now my dad he spends time with me no matter how 
busy he is he always finds time for me. It makes me very happy when he makes time for 
me. My dad and me are best buddy’s my dad really cares for me unlike my mom and her 
friends do. With my dad is where I really want to be I think it is plane to see where I 
really want to be. My mom tells me that she loves me. But my dad does not just tell me 
he loves me he shows me every day just how much he loves me so with my dad I want 
to stay. He’s the one who really loves me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bangalee Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 9:08 PM
often I observe something this type social family problem; nice your expression; written well- I enjoyed
Falotico Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 7:14 AM
Touching write my friend.. heartfelt.... tell your Dad your feelings and make him smile..
Guzzi Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 7:13 AM
divorce is so hard on everyone, I am a child of divorce and I also got a divorce, you have a great Dad and life is long your Mom loves you and she will try hard I'm sure to do better by you. Light & Love
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