Can You See Me?

Mommy can you see me?
I can bounce really high!
Maybe with some bouncy shoes
I can visit you in the sky!
I'm seven years old now Mommy.
You've been gone about a year.
I can't wait to see you Mommy, 
and your memories are near.

Mommy can you see me?
Oops- I failed another test.
But I remembered what you told me
and I tried my very best.
I'm ten years old now Mommy.
You've been gone about four years.
I really miss you Mommy,
and I wish you were here.

Mommy can you see me?
Dad went off on me again.
I slit my wrists to ease the pain, 
I have scars all over my skin. 
I'm fourteen years old now Mommy, 
you've been gone about eight years. 
Who are you anyways Mommy?
Thanks a lot for leaving me in tears...

Mommy can you see me?
I'm so glad I finally changed!
In accepted Jesus like you once did
so my life could be rearranged.
I'm sixteen years old now Mommy, 
you've missed the past ten years.
But I'll see you in heaven Mommy, 
and that helps me fight my fears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/30/2009 5:19:00 AM
Ashley congrats on placing in Chris's contest - God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:26:00 AM
Beautiful, poignant write here Ashley and a well-deserved selection to be a winner in Christopher's contest. Congratulations and hope to read lots more of your writing soon!
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:56:00 PM
Such a heart wrenching write! Congratulations on this entry to Christopher's contest! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:49:00 PM
Wow, I loved this. Thank you for giving me a reaction because I found myself tearing up a bit reading this. Congratulations on your win in this contest. You "shed your skin" in such a beautiful way!
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Date: 8/24/2009 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for entering the contest..Congrats.
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:56:00 PM
What a touching poem, very nice....Karla
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