Can You Relate,

A week ago i found out i had control over my dreams
Its kinda crazy if you know what i mean
I live my normal life when im awake 
Then i hurry back to sleep is this a mistake
I think you all can relate 
When im asleep there is no physical pain 
But the emotional pain remains 
When im asleep i can do what ever i desire 
There is nothing that i cant acquire 
Its hard not to cross that fine line 
Between what you cant do in normal time 
Last night i was super strong and could fly 
I jumped off a cliff without having to die 
The night before i had a big bag of money 
I spent it on a girl her name was honey 
I bought me a really nice car 
I know that doesnt sound very smart 
But its kinda like living in avatar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/23/2018 8:29:00 AM
This is a fun one!
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Mike Grant
Date: 8/23/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 7/18/2018 8:56:00 AM
The story line flows smoothly and sets the pace for this poem. The theme is maintained throughout the poem and the imagery is good. A gentle reminder that dreams are part of life and no less important than reality for they nourish the soul and spur the imagination. Emile.
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