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Can You Relate,

A week ago i found out i had control over my dreams Its kinda crazy if you know what i mean I live my normal life when im awake Then i hurry back to sleep is this a mistake I think you all can relate When im asleep there is no physical pain But the emotional pain remains When im asleep i can do what ever i desire There is nothing that i cant acquire Its hard not to cross that fine line Between what you cant do in normal time Last night i was super strong and could fly I jumped off a cliff without having to die The night before i had a big bag of money I spent it on a girl her name was honey I bought me a really nice car I know that doesnt sound very smart But its kinda like living in avatar

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Date: 8/23/2018 8:29:00 AM
This is a fun one!
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Mike Grant
Date: 8/23/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 7/18/2018 8:56:00 AM
The story line flows smoothly and sets the pace for this poem. The theme is maintained throughout the poem and the imagery is good. A gentle reminder that dreams are part of life and no less important than reality for they nourish the soul and spur the imagination. Emile.
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