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Can You Imagine?

Can you imagine a picture the most beautiful you’ve ever seen where the sun will shine all day long, the perfect setting for loves young dream there are mountains on the skyline and trees are different shades of green the sky as blue as your eyes are and tulips are in bloom along the stream and through it all, a lone path runs, it’s a road only made for two where two hearts came together, hearts that belong to me and you down that path we’ve been travelling, there is no end it runs forever it gets more beautiful the more we walk, happy, in love, together.

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Janette Fisher

Date: 5/12/2009 11:27:00 AM

A wonderful heartfelt piece of writing, really beautiful Paul I loved it...thanks for the comment about 'Morris' your points have been taken on board and changes will be made. Janette

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/11/2009 5:50:00 AM

Nice! this is beautiful Paul, well done and heartfelt. Thanks for visiting me and the nice comments you left also. Good to see you here at the Soup :)

Edward Orozco

Date: 4/28/2009 1:25:00 AM

Nicely written Paul, so full of imagery! -darkpoet

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/18/2009 6:04:00 AM

all lovers minds walk that road, my verse Above Desire sings the same song. Gotta love a lover! light & Love

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/17/2009 6:49:00 AM

Paul, I feel something yearning for birth in this poem. Why don't you change the shape of it, so the lines are broken by the meters' wings, and surprise yourself where this will fly. Thanks for the privilege to nurture the words of a genius ... love, my friend

Amber Bynum

Date: 4/16/2009 9:23:00 AM

i love this..its sounds like something i would write myself

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/15/2009 2:30:00 PM

just wonderful,you've created a heaven on earth here