Can You Can a Comment
Can You Can a Comment
There are only certain things that are allowed
To happen all by yourself or in a big crowd
Like poems I have been writing as of late
On them having the power to concentrate.
What will end product of poem be for me
How it is interpreted am starting to see
Into past my promising poem will fade
Few or no comments were ever made.
Where in poem do you need an ingredient
To improve them and make more expedient
In last two hours have written four more
An unsurmountable addition is still in store.
People read poems and keep coming back
Yet still comments they will always lack
So would you say I was slightly suspicious
By saying your behavior is concupiscious.
James Thomas Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet
RiverSea Plantation
Bolivia, NC
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Concupiscence
Wow. Guess I have invented a new word
By adding copious to concupiscence. The
result is concupiscious. Added footnote.
Copyright © James Horn | Year Posted 2015
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