Can You Can a Comment

Can You Can a Comment There are only certain things that are allowed To happen all by yourself or in a big crowd Like poems I have been writing as of late On them having the power to concentrate. What will end product of poem be for me How it is interpreted am starting to see Into past my promising poem will fade Few or no comments were ever made. Where in poem do you need an ingredient To improve them and make more expedient In last two hours have written four more An unsurmountable addition is still in store. People read poems and keep coming back Yet still comments they will always lack So would you say I was slightly suspicious By saying your behavior is concupiscious. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran and Poet RiverSea Plantation Bolivia, NC https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Concupiscence Wow. Guess I have invented a new word By adding copious to concupiscence. The result is concupiscious. Added footnote.