Can We Meet

Can We Meet

Dear Ashutosh

As long as I remember
You just painted my days of yore
Love floated through my eyes
Anxious to reach your heart's shores

You sat at edge of third row
Oh!how my heart skipped beats
I blushed and those goosebumps
Now I contemplate love was raw and sweet

It was our ninth grade
You were topper of your previous school
So am I of my class
A look in your eyes ,and my heart defied

Your melodious voice bowled me over
We bumped at the end of corridor tumbling down
In fits of laughter your dimples caught my sight
Can we meet in the park at end of town

I ponder we can be more than just friends
Wishing you fancy singing just as me
Why not talk on topics other than books
I will be waiting for you beneath eucalyptus tree

09/02/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/9/2019 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Purbasha . Eve ~`*
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/9/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you for your kind wishes.
Date: 3/9/2019 1:10:00 PM
"Why not talk on topics other than books", I absolutely love reading this poem but this line was my favourite, in 8th Grade, I went to a social event and find out that one of my female classmate was out there, like me she was alao getting bored, so I decided to talk with her, guess what? For all 1 and a half hour, the only thing she talk about was Chemistry, well not to mention that I never dare to join her company again, anyways many congratulations on your wonderful win in my contest
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/9/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Sir,though this is a piece of fiction but I enjoyed writing this.
Date: 2/9/2019 2:49:00 PM
Hello Roy Purbasha , this sounds like a lovely place to meet someone special. Enjoyed this poem. Also nice to meet you. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/12/2019 2:15:00 PM
I hope your day went well today.Darlene
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/9/2019 10:17:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and words of appreciation.They mean a lot to me .Also delighted to meet you and have a nice day!
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