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Can Vos Animadverto Silva Per Nemus

torn within, the heart is weeping to find all that the soul is seeking to dismiss the rhyme of any reason to trust the senses and the season Loosen hold on mine own mind and maybe then that's where i'll find the things I know within are real the things I dream, the things I feel As i sit and therefore ponder out the window, out there yonder The trees they wave me in to listen to hear the secrets of the missing If i start running the world will turn as trailing flames my feet will burn to find a truth within the madness which lies there buried, in forlorn sadness

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Date: 11/6/2010 5:28:00 PM
Rachel, I agree with Chris, entirely. This would have been my expression to this your poem. I do like tight rhymes, I tend to do that myself. Nice write! Thanks for commending me on my 2nd place win with "A Sentimental Letter To My Only True Love". Joy (Jew)
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