Yoni Dvorkis Poet Shape

Can Perfect Love Engender Fear?

I searched for


              Something
              Tangible
              That could
              Symbolize
The love I felt for the world
And all its kindhearted people
But all I found was a book written
              By men
              Claiming
              To have a
              Message
              I was truly
              Seeking
              Without 
              Ability to
              Explain
              Why some
              Questions
              Are truer
              When left
              Unanswered

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May 28, 2009 at 2:09 PM Powerful poem with an artistic flair. I'm glad I ran across this again. Blessings to you for sharing your talent in this unique way. Have a wonderful day! Karen

Brian Strand April 1, 2009 at 8:55 AM This books need a key to be understood Yoni.Well constructed visual poetry here.Rgds Brian & thanks for your thoughtful blog comments today.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 30, 2009 at 5:22 PM I like it. If we lived in a perfect world, we would not need to even ask the questions. But reality is that everyone of us has trouble finding the message and some never bother to ask. We just have to keep trying, praying, and feeling. (You inspire me.) Great shape poem....and as always, thought provoking.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 19, 2009 at 6:39 AM Dear Yoni, The shape enhances the Spirit of the POEM Awesome Write ALWAYS...HG Good day Yoni,I am HGarvey I just read YOUR Comments on Arany's POEM "POETRY" We are of like minds I will be reading more of YOUR POETIC ART ALWAYS...HG

March 17, 2009 at 11:26 AM Wow! The shape of the poem adds to the message. What a creative piece. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Winter March 17, 2009 at 11:16 AM There is so much beauty in this write. That you captured it so well in it's shape adds so much to the spiritual truth of your words. Exceptional, truly. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem. Love, Shar

Arany P. March 17, 2009 at 6:16 AM Yoni, this is a wonderful write... your message is so inspiring and thought provoking! ~ Arany

Carolyn Devonshire March 16, 2009 at 1:14 PM I think you found the message, Yoni, and conveyed it very well. Love the last thought about questions being truer when left unanswered. CD

Mohammad Yamin March 16, 2009 at 12:14 PM Yoni, This is an enchanting poem -both in shape and contents. You are in pursuit of truth and reality. Many a thinkers and philosophers have been searching from time immemorial. The horizon of thoughts is boundless. One has to keep exploring. Thanks for your educated comments on my poem 'May We Smile' . God Bless You. -Mohammad

L'Nass Shango March 16, 2009 at 6:57 AM Unless you catch the wind my friend, Bob Dylan says its blowing there, there still meaning in every cross. Love and peace

Sara Lokken March 14, 2009 at 1:29 PM I see your point. I am spiritual, not religious, because I knew your words well. I think in life we cannot have the whole truth...but we can have part of the truth....so that is why we much search, for the parts to the whole. Best wishes, Sara

Laurie Ginn March 14, 2009 at 4:49 AM Beautiful words, beautiful shape, I love the way it drifts off on the side, going into my favs.