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Can Perfect Love Engender Fear?

I searched for


              Something
              Tangible
              That could
              Symbolize
The love I felt for the world
And all its kindhearted people
But all I found was a book written
              By men
              Claiming
              To have a
              Message
              I was truly
              Seeking
              Without 
              Ability to
              Explain
              Why some
              Questions
              Are truer
              When left
              Unanswered

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Date: 5/28/2009 2:09:00 PM

Powerful poem with an artistic flair. I'm glad I ran across this again. Blessings to you for sharing your talent in this unique way. Have a wonderful day! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 4/1/2009 8:55:00 AM

This books need a key to be understood Yoni.Well constructed visual poetry here.Rgds Brian & thanks for your thoughtful blog comments today.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/30/2009 5:22:00 PM

I like it. If we lived in a perfect world, we would not need to even ask the questions. But reality is that everyone of us has trouble finding the message and some never bother to ask. We just have to keep trying, praying, and feeling. (You inspire me.) Great shape poem....and as always, thought provoking.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2009 6:39:00 AM

Dear Yoni, The shape enhances the Spirit of the POEM Awesome Write ALWAYS...HG Good day Yoni,I am HGarvey I just read YOUR Comments on Arany's POEM "POETRY" We are of like minds I will be reading more of YOUR POETIC ART ALWAYS...HG

Date: 3/17/2009 11:26:00 AM

Wow! The shape of the poem adds to the message. What a creative piece. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/17/2009 11:16:00 AM

There is so much beauty in this write. That you captured it so well in it's shape adds so much to the spiritual truth of your words. Exceptional, truly. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem. Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 3/17/2009 6:16:00 AM

Yoni, this is a wonderful write... your message is so inspiring and thought provoking! ~ Arany

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2009 1:14:00 PM

I think you found the message, Yoni, and conveyed it very well. Love the last thought about questions being truer when left unanswered. CD

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/16/2009 12:14:00 PM

Yoni, This is an enchanting poem -both in shape and contents. You are in pursuit of truth and reality. Many a thinkers and philosophers have been searching from time immemorial. The horizon of thoughts is boundless. One has to keep exploring. Thanks for your educated comments on my poem 'May We Smile' . God Bless You. -Mohammad

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/16/2009 6:57:00 AM

Unless you catch the wind my friend, Bob Dylan says its blowing there, there still meaning in every cross. Love and peace

Sara Lokken

Date: 3/14/2009 1:29:00 PM

I see your point. I am spiritual, not religious, because I knew your words well. I think in life we cannot have the whole truth...but we can have part of the truth....so that is why we much search, for the parts to the whole. Best wishes, Sara