Can I Complain and You Explain

(* This I wrote after my previous poem "GODS QUESTIONS", as I felt that it was a more realistic and honest way in which we try to understand God... both poems express different sides of the story)


God could you please convey
what it was I heard you say

why do children die so young
what of worldly wars unsung
who allows the poor to starve
when pain and illness make life hard

Oh God please could I complain? you have grafted my soul through your grief yet worldly pain steals our faith and belief sons with failures--liars and foolish thieves will always stray ailing ramblers--lost and found friends will still betray whores and angels—cheating men leavers never stay separated--young orphan lives twisted forever grey racial haters—war creators politicians get their way lonely widows—distant fathers givers move away soulful saints—fallen warriors preachers always pray cynic doubters—fearful mothers faith tested every day Please explain- Mercy, Grace, Peace and Love in Your Eternal land above © Kim van Breda—March 2014

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Date: 3/9/2014 12:59:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Kim - The key is to be grateful ........ I believe. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 3/9/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise... you re right.. we need to give thanks in all things.
Date: 3/9/2014 12:18:00 PM
This is beautiful Kim...I often complain about events that are troubling. Well done......Tim
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Tim. The world is such a mess and it is hard for us Christians to try to justify to non-believers the reasons why. Only God is omniscient.
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