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Camp fire grows cold, The campers are going home; Time to be sad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 1/15/2009 4:46:00 PM
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Date: 12/19/2008 2:43:00 AM
This is the camper's Blues. Nice little haiku...Raul
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:45:00 PM
Aweome write here, Daniel ... you've captured so much within this wonderful form. I too have a "camping" poem and it is always hard to come back to the concrete ... smile ... Hope your holidays are warm, wonderful and that '09 is a good year for you!
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Date: 12/18/2008 3:39:00 PM
Well, I am not big on camping. Still, I love toasting marshmallows and campfires ~lol~ Great haiku!
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Date: 12/18/2008 2:28:00 PM
loved it, well done Daniel
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