Camping

Camp fire grows cold,
The campers are going home;
Time to be sad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 4:46 PM
GOOD JOB DANIEL THAT IS GOOD.........................DANIELLE
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December 19, 2008 at 2:43 AM
This is the camper's Blues. Nice little haiku...Raul
Mason Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:45 PM
Aweome write here, Daniel ... you've captured so much within this wonderful form. I too have a "camping" poem and it is always hard to come back to the concrete ... smile ... Hope your holidays are warm, wonderful and that '09 is a good year for you!
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December 18, 2008 at 3:39 PM
Well, I am not big on camping. Still, I love toasting marshmallows and campfires ~lol~ Great haiku!
Anderson Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 2:28 PM
loved it, well done Daniel
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