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Campfire Tales

Morning Camp hushed morning sun dappling through the wood smoke wake up! smell the toast! Sundown Camp embers glowing hot s'mores branches whittled sharp oops! marshmallow flame! 11/17/13

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Date: 2/6/2016 4:27:00 PM
Excellently penned gem.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/6/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Iris! I love camping!
Date: 11/3/2015 11:31:00 PM
Love the haiku. I love camping, the best part's when sharing tales takes place. Love the sundown most. LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 2:27:00 PM
Nice element of surprise at the end.
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Date: 11/18/2013 11:41:00 PM
i'm so into bonfires.. you forgot the hotdogs, jimbo?... love the charmiong spin of this one!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/18/2013 11:50:00 AM
Fantastic, fantastic!!!!!!!!! Toast, smores, hell yeah...!
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Date: 11/18/2013 11:13:00 AM
- A haiku written beautiful and talented, I see your picture clearly! - Well done Jimbo ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2013 8:11:00 AM
Beautiful images, of the campfire, Jimbo
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:22:00 PM
Enjoyd d poetic campfire sights n sounds. A cracking gud poem, crunchy too.
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