James Marshall Goff Poet Haiku

Campfire Tales

Morning Camp

hushed morning sun
dappling through the wood smoke
wake up! smell the toast!


Sundown Camp

embers glowing hot
s'mores branches whittled sharp
oops! marshmallow flame!


11/17/13

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis February 6, 2016 at 4:27 PM Excellently penned gem. James Marshall Goff February 6, 2016 at 5:45 PM Thanks Iris! I love camping!

Poet Destroyer A November 3, 2015 at 11:31 PM Love the haiku. I love camping, the best part's when sharing tales takes place. Love the sundown most. LINDA

Christine Phillips November 20, 2013 at 2:27 PM Nice element of surprise at the end.

Nette Onclaud November 18, 2013 at 11:41 PM i'm so into bonfires.. you forgot the hotdogs, jimbo?... love the charmiong spin of this one!..:) huggs

Poet Tacito November 18, 2013 at 11:50 AM Fantastic, fantastic!!!!!!!!! Toast, smores, hell yeah...!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2013 at 11:13 AM - A haiku written beautiful and talented, I see your picture clearly! - Well done Jimbo ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta November 18, 2013 at 8:11 AM Beautiful images, of the campfire, Jimbo

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri November 17, 2013 at 11:22 PM Enjoyd d poetic campfire sights n sounds. A cracking gud poem, crunchy too.