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Camille On Her Deathbed

Her diminished and shading features As if shrouded within a cocoon or now masked Graduations of colour that death was successively imposing on her motionless features Dimming her bouquet of red flowers that seem to float away from her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 10:42:00 AM
Well done Nigel :) enjoyed your different style of fading away*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/3/2010 12:10:00 PM
Death is an experience we all share. Your peice evokes this well. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/2/2010 7:09:00 AM
Welll well this is a Good poem ... you put it and wrap the poem beautifully ... sure you have talemt on that hand well done poet :) thanks on ur coment you bein to java as you said Gamalan or i get it wrong :)
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Date: 8/1/2010 7:52:00 PM
succinct good job!
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Date: 8/1/2010 1:42:00 PM
Greta Garbo at her best Nigel.. in a blockbuster movie Camille.. great write if u make it a Triolette u could have entered Andrea's contest but its already closed for entries... wonderful memories and thankxxx for your spectacular comments on my recent post. ... happy Sunday.. with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:26:00 PM
Sorry Nigel Fox, how rude of me of course(( J'ia pris les cours de Français de retour du secondaire .......oi did i get that right,,well yes,,Thank you,,LeeAnn
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:33:00 PM
wow,, interesrting write,, enjoyed...P.D.
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:25:00 PM
nice write,you must be from england sir england has many great things:monty python,the beatles,clockwork orange,and my favorite pink floyd
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