Romeo Naces Poet Tail-rhyme

Camiguin Shoreline

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.. though the waves
      violently swirl
         and splash about,

.. though they fiercely
      gnarl and roar,
         the rippling wavelets

   woo and caress,
      lap and gently kiss
         the soft shore ..

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Nick Bagnall June 22, 2011 at 5:37 AM There is something about rhyming the middle line and the last line which make the=is a very pleasing read, enjoyed Romeo Naces May 29, 2019 at 10:51 PM Thanks, Nick.

Nette Onclaud June 22, 2011 at 5:17 AM i love this place, romeo.. sana do masyading ma-commercialize! a lovely impression of camiguin's quietude! :) huggs,nette Romeo Naces May 29, 2019 at 10:50 PM Yes, still pristine. You've been there lately, Nette?