Camellia Sasanqua

Camellia white white Petals have covered the ground With the first fall snow

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John Freeman

Date: 11/16/2009 10:34:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, as beautiful petals cover the ground. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/14/2009 12:08:00 PM

Ca-mel-chu to you to

Sammy Shaq

Date: 11/14/2009 4:31:00 AM

I feel tranquility, such a beautiful write. So vivid, I felt the breeze of beauty and peace. Favs. Love, Sami.

Brian Strand

Date: 11/14/2009 12:28:00 AM

Very pretty poetry Sara.Thanks for your comments oday.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2009 8:02:00 PM

What beautiful lilting words, Sara, always enjoy your imagery...in haiku... I am learning more about this form from u and Sue Mason... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry and on your tribute... my pleasure... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/13/2009 10:09:00 AM

beautiful imagery my friend. always wonderful reading here. :)

Margaret Clerici

Date: 11/13/2009 8:15:00 AM

Sara, I have enjoyed readng through your poems, especially this one. White petals on snow, a beautiful image. Many thanks for your encouraging comments on my stuff. As a new souper it feels good to know that somebody is out there! Keep writing! Margaret

P Sheart

Date: 11/13/2009 8:00:00 AM

A lovely Haiku Sara. Camellia's are beautiful! Love Light Patty Keep writing!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/13/2009 5:38:00 AM

Sara, Your writing excels. I love camellias. And the image of white petals on fresh snow is beautiful. Lovely haiku. Smiling, Dane Ann